Thursday, July 13, 2006

Walking The Dog Comments

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The air was hot, humid, and heavy
When we ventured out.

As the sun beat down upon us
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Pene Burkey
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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 July 2006

and i smell something very tight about your poem. a great poetess in the making. never give up poetry. best wishes from john.

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