Walking tall in a visage of bold.
Gloom, age rolls in empty days.
Raked dust, blows hot and cold.
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grt rhymes............great rhythmic flow.........enhanced with beautiful poetic devices :)
Very well written poem - you have a great talent for rhyme and expression. Well done.
A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up! Great talent you got! Love and Peace for always!
Awesome work. What a rythmic flow. Great imagery with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A daring hope' on page 1.
Weariness and languor of life that muddle the spirits in low and emptiness of hearts, all are described in beautiful figures of speech. The poems to the end quite smoothly and in perfect rhymes.