Friday, May 20, 2016

Walking Sandy Shores Comments

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Sandy shores along a river bank below, reminding me of
days gone by, walking down it's miles, looking out to-
wards the ocean.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 20 May 2016

This is wonderful. I think that maternal spirit of what people still call Mother India was present inside as you traveled the road and wrote this poem. Your inner journey was paralleled by the outer journey. But in truth they were and are ONE. Your poem makes the spirituality of India, which can seem so remote, immediate and accessible. I love these poems that make India seem like my place of being too.

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