Saturday, October 3, 2015

Walking Sand Comments

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Come on here oh dear walking sand,
Standing here I am waiting in land.

Sand oh dear hear fly in sky banned,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 09 October 2020

Poet's imagination is very powerful. Sand is truly walking in his word. This poem is very beautiful.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

I confess, on first reading I was stumped. And then I read Poet; s Notes and then ah I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, your imagination truly soars..

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 March 2016

Joy of love! With the peace of the hearts. Thanks for sharing.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 October 2015

Scanned memory speaks mind is planned, Joy is improved life is well spanned. Verily, planned actions bring joy and success.

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David Wood 05 October 2015

We have a sandy beach four miles long where I live and often I have walked it, all eight miles, and I often think of poems to write their. Lovely poem you wrote.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Sand, a natural massager to human muscles, legs and source of liveliness............I enjoyed this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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