Thursday, September 22, 2016

Walking On Broken Glass Comments

Rating: ★2.5

She kept him out in the garden shed
Where her sisters wouldn't see,
He'd not been once in her upstairs bed
If they saw, she'd say, ‘Who me? '
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David Lewis Paget
sister september
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Paul Reed 22 September 2016

Excellent, lots of tangled lines to untangle and meanings to work out which gives this poem great depth. Thanks David.

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
David Lewis Paget
David Lewis Paget
Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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