Thursday, November 19, 2009

Walking On Air. Comments

Rating: 5.0

From deep blue mood
of try-and-try-again
daytime behaviour,
I sink in relief
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Fay Slimm
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Catrina Heart 03 December 2009

stunning composition...Thanks for sharing....well done! ! !

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Walking on Air is one of the best love poems I have read in such a long time. It sings with love and joy at the presence of another. Images to die for here Fay. 10 love Karin

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C. P. Sharma 01 December 2009

Fay, Certainly, your feet are not on ground Because your lost love you have found. CP

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David Harris 21 November 2009

Fay, this is a brilliantly awesome poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 19 November 2009

This is one of your best Fay straight from the heart 10 ++ Daniel

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Carol Gall 19 November 2009

such an amazing write fay 10

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Patti Masterman 19 November 2009

Love these lines: Before I fly, with my feet astride shoulders of strongest amore, I am aware inside I am walking on air as before. It's like they're saying: catch me before I fall..(smile)

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Fay Slimm

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