Saturday, September 20, 2014

Walking Is A Way Of Life Comments

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From childhood on
I walked the woods
and hills of Tennessee:
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Daniel Brick 08 October 2014

This is a beautiful poem, both in its sentiments and in the words which carry them to the reader. The title really sums it up, but I find this stanza is the beating heart of the poem: I WAS SIMPLY WALKING, /AND TALKING TO MYSELF, /LOSING MYSELF, FINDING MYSELF. The two experiences of both losing and finding oneself prove in the course of the poem to be ONE experience, and both are necessary for our fullness of being. I love the way your lines guide us to this understanding. Your emphasis on the phrase TIME ENOUGH in the closing section is another blessed awareness your poem conveys. I too am a WALKER for the very reasons your poem celebrates, and I have a poem (my 100th!) WALKING THROUGH AUTUMN which you will find to be a companion piece to yours. We are walking over the same ground in our respective poems.

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David Lessard 27 September 2014

Walking is a way of life for me too Frank, here in the central highlands of Arizona.

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 20 September 2014

I never realised how important it was for mental healthy.i like it dear.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 September 2014

Walking confirms one is alive and truely speaking this is beautiful poem

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Frank Avon

Frank Avon

Pulaski, TN
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