Sunday, November 12, 2017

Walking Into A Screen Of Raindrops Comments

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Making sure the dollar umbrella is open,
I walk into the world protecting my
head, ears and coiffure. The rest of me
throws my body in denims blue, that
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Mj Lemon 14 November 2017

Each raindrop marks the passage of time. Perhaps we do not notice it, but at times the drops rage and the result is a torrent. Ignoring is now done at one's peril. A great lesson taught in such a subtle, magnificent way. Terrific poem, Sarah.

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Savita Tyagi 13 November 2017

Lovely poem. Fight for struggle is always there but the thrill of being out in rain is its own reward. When it slips I know life is slipping by me. Thanks for sharing.

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