Walking In The Wood Comments

Beauty of this poem reflects in so many ways. It is nicely pennee well crafted with fluency and rhyming composition. It also expresses the solitude of life remembering byegone days. It reminds me a song of Kaviguru which i often listen Purano diner..... Thanks for sharing.

... too poignant a write.... the sun would shine on you brightly once again..in time to come

I can sense the winter is chasing me - To cover me with it's heap of snow and chilled breeze lovely lines!

Beautiful sentiments expressed. Friends must realize that they need to call on frequently when one is all alone. In the meantime keep working to write your beautiful poems. They are reaching many and you are not alone. I read the poem again to feel the birds tweeting. Thank you.

in our good times we will be in a rush...at that time we expect a resting place...when we will be alone then silence will be our companion....very touching poem..................

A very beautiful and heart touching poem. I hope writing brings some solace to those lonely moments when one pours heart felt sentiments upon paper. Thank you for sharing. Loved reading it.

As you know Amitava, Imcan so relate to this and understand fully where you are coming from. A veery sad and poignant poem. Very well written.

Beautiful poem. I loved reading it again, beautiful lines... Under the mid day's scorching sun Walking in the wood's serpentine path. A bird's tweet from a distant place Making the silence more prominent! ..... Very true said, silence is really very painful....You have painted a very beautiful picture of silence and even the minute sounds we can hear in deep silence. Loved reading it. Thank you for sharing with us.

an impressive description of a lonely life.

A poem that weaves a filament of diction par excellence and a theme that is unique in nature have a parallel brilliance here, thank you for the good share, sir

The silence of the woods is touchingly compared with the silence of your empty nest....... Your sense of loneliness is pitched deep in each line and it tugs at the heart! A poem which has flown from the inner springs of a bereaved heart! Amitava.... be calmed! Time is a great healer!

So touching.....And so poignantly penned this piece it really touched my heart......Amitavaji......emotions so painfully expressed......I am speechless

serpentine path. good writing, thanks,

Amazingly melancholy, your sorrow is very intense, very poignant in this poem. You have described life after the death of a loved one so poetically artistic, like a painting being viewed, Amitava. I feel your loneliness and emptiness in my heart as I read your poem, it brings tears to my eyes. Thank you, Amitava, it is beautiful, yet in a sorrowful way. RoseAnn