Saturday, May 23, 2009

Walking In My Shoes! ! ! Comments

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I can’t believe such guilt eats through my body
Like termites eating wood through a house
but my house is completely different in these eyes
Imagine your house as a graveyard of dreams
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2009

Walkin in yer own shoes n feel those excitement...............every day is a new frontier, of life.Well penned bro!

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Akram Awadat 29 May 2009

wonderful poem, very good write go ahead

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James Mclain 29 May 2009

Then walk alone and wash them all in eyes of salt..and watch..iip

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

'So I’m going to change the rules of judgment and self esteem Turning this road to salvation from an thousand miles Into a single foot as I’ll transform into my true self again As god watch my changes into a better man…one step at a time' Wonderful composition, love with 10.

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SUMMERCHICK UNKNOWN 25 May 2009

This is a great poem baby.i like this one you really express how you feel.keep up the great work cj baby.

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