Sunday, January 18, 2009

Walking Eddie Comments

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He walked all neighborhoods,
all he did was roam.
He seemed to be homeless,
but he did have a home.
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rico avila
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Trishula Mudras 12 August 2009

Your last line is crushing...it really brings the deep feeling of remorse home on many levels.

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Rosalita Fernandez 15 March 2009

wow....not sure what to write....i love it, its really deep!

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