Friday, September 26, 2008

Walking Behind. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I keep asking myself
Why I walked, deep in the shadow
Of one I thought clever,
Much brighter and stronger than I
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Fay Slimm
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Kris Smith 26 September 2008

Loved it Fay great when we can step out and find freedom for ourslves, big 10 Chris xx

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 26 September 2008

oh boy! ..this one really gave me goosebumps...it so reminded me of the way i felt about someone in my own life and the oppression that i felt as long as i lived in awe of that person.! amazing write fay.a 10!

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David Threadgold 26 September 2008

Hi Fay. Yet another good read. I like the last two lines, out of the shadow and into the light.your writing certainly needs to be kept out of those shadows. Thanks Regards Dave T.

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Fay Slimm

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