Thursday, November 8, 2007

Walking At Dusk Comments

Rating: 2.2

the moon peels back each
in tremulous cadence
her outer raiment
…the darkening orb of earth
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Andrew James
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Original Unknown Girl 16 November 2007

I love the moon.... and I love your poem too! Your eloquent offering was indeed poetry far beyond the realms I could write... Just gorgeous. HG: -) xx

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Agnes Török 10 November 2007

You truly see the most natrual of things in a completely diffrent light. Things others take for granted you raise to the sky (two ways of reading that) and describe in the most beautiful of ways. You have a poet's eyes. Thank you for sharing Love Agnes

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Angel Ofdarkness 09 November 2007

you've have such a nice way of discibing the moon its almost as if she was a goddess i love it. love, Angel

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Francesca Johnson 08 November 2007

I've never thought of the moon like that before! You've brought new beauty to an already beautiful subject here, Andrew. Enjoyable. Love, Fran xx

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