Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Walking Along The Sea Shore Comments

Rating: 3.3

Walking along the seashore
I could think but no more

You were doing my flying hair
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akram saqib
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Sherif Monem 04 March 2010

Very nice simple poem expresses passing by love.

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Seema Chowdhury 09 September 2009

i hope you get the love of your life. good luck just don't give up. happy ramadan.

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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2009

the last two lines read great!

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Shams Tahir 26 August 2009

love is a truth and also betrayed love

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