Friday, August 22, 2014

Walking Alone In Your Memories Comments

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A wave of emotions ran down my spine,
locking up my eyes and striking me in the past,
left me unspoken, touched me with loneliness,
the stir of broken dreams pinched my heart calling your name.
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2016

touched me with loneliness, the stir of broken dreams pinched my heart calling your name. I heard the days whispering to the nights 'she's broken and worn down but why? ' wonderful expressions, they are very poetic lines. thank you. tony

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Jahid Jogot 03 August 2015

left in a long wait of a never ending journey nice

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Rajesh Narayanan 04 February 2015

Nice one. Very touching. Read my poem The Last Journey.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 August 2014

A great lovely write, I expect soon your name will be seen with the topmost poets.

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Asma Khan 22 December 2015

Many thanks for the kind words. I really appreciate your following on my page.

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Unwritten Soul 22 August 2014

Heart will write when something touched it Heart will reveal when the beats get inspired In write of pen and paper things unite Then emotions revealed_soul

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Asma Khan 22 August 2014

I never discovered a poet in myself until I came across a very special person in my life. Thank you, Shansero.

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