Monday, April 15, 2013

Walking Alone Comments

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A love so true, that's all I know
This love I have given you
A love so divine from a heart of mine
Wondering if you can be mine.
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Lorcelie A Tenorio
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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2019

Delicate expressions of love and hope, in a well articulated poem written in persuasive diction from the heart. Very passionate, so touching. Thanks for sharing. Remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 September 2015

A love so divine from a heart of mine I cried in vain but no one can hear Only the birds and the wind blowing my ears Wishing that they can feel my pain So to ease my heart full in vain. come back my dear friend. such a longing for your love, for your friend. it is so very passionately described in your poem . thank you very much Lorecelie

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