Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Walking Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am walking
Around me is nobody
I am lonely, I am unhappy
Oh! such good were those days
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shruti modi
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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

words r lil for you poetess!

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Gone with the wind 29 July 2008

One day the whole world will walk with you..with your rules...a very nice write..comes straight from the heart and travels straight to the heart: -) Love Gul

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Daniel Allen 27 July 2008

It sounds like its from your heart. I agree an amazing write, im glad you could share.

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Colin Jeffery 16 July 2008

You are indeed a poet of merit.

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

I understand you poem completely. This is an awesome write. You have changed for the better, don't step back. I am giving you a 10. Thank you for sharing, Linda

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