Walk with me for a while,
Throw your glum, and please, smile-
Our heaven is not very near.....
See there a grove of pine,
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Beautiful portrayal of the serene expanse of nature on way to the man's final destination is quite heart touching. Thanks for this amazing poem. I quote a few lines: Let's walk thru the rain-soaked pine and fir.... For us now, divinity is in everything, Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
So, flash with delight, and take stroll, Celestial abode of love is our final goal! seeking divinity in everything. what a mature thinking. thank you.
Very nice. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day! At first glance I thought the second line said Throw away your gum...
Divinity in the love of surrounding beauty simply makes one excited in a trance nice!
Divinity is in everything...in each line of this poem. A great work, Neela. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful! Exquisite! Very romantic love poem elegantly penned with conviction. A well encapsulated piece with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Neela.
Once again a Fantastic poem Neela. I liked the lines.... so flash with delight, and take stroll, Celestial abode of love is our final goal! Loved reading each lines.
Beautifully written.....For us now, divinity is in everything..... A must read for the lazy people....they ll walk, I am sure.... enjoyed reading this....thank you....
A beautiful poem...... through the shady grove of pine, tread hand in hand through the untrodden path to the celestial abode of love! Enjoyed!
Very well written. Loved reading it. 'Nothing is extremely unfair' such are life's workings. Reminded me of my poem 'A Point'. I invite you to read it.
Come back smile for the grimmest-jawed boring finding no interest in love man, written well though i have strong objection as regards the phrase - divinity is in everything-summoned love played well with the words
Celestial abode of love is our final goal! excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Nila, just beautiful, it is so subtle and so much truth as we stand together and walk the path on a heavens cloud. Yes, so beautiful Divinity is in everything. Sublime poem Nila, I love it so much! Love, Kasia
Nothing is extremely unfair........... how do you measure matter in quantum? as time and space act upon in vector nothing is fair or unfair as when relative it is gods particle to tell reason of truth, beautiful word of wisdom,10++, thanks for sharing
a lovely poem of togetherness through and thin? ...........well written