Saturday, May 25, 2013

Walk With Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

An empty road.... this peaceful night....
As evening breeze, blend with street lights

Though far are we, from city's glow
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Jesus Diaz Llorico
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 August 2018

Our pleasant talk, gaze from afar Your sparkling smile mix with the stars Together we'll laugh, so much fun The world will know that we are one! ......whisper to me that we are in love......... thank u dear poet. tony

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 25 December 2015

So beautiful... hope your dream come true

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Khaoula Basty 25 December 2015

I hope it will come true Nice penned :) 10 Rate :)

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Ging Taping 15 September 2014

Full of hopes...someday soon it will happen.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 September 2014

Simply expressing a love you hope to have in the future is very beautiful, brought tears to my eyes because it is so endearing and tender. Fantastic poem, Jesus! ! Thank you for sharing your heart. RoseAnn

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2013

Stuck with the feeling you left here..great best mark for u :) _Soul

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Syd Barrett 25 September 2013

Beautiful. bellissimo! ! ! !

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Leonard Langberg 24 September 2013

Cool and interesting poem!

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Tim Shivers 22 September 2013

Inspiring beautiful artistic poem of joy and peace- -much enjoyment! ....

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Helen Remegio 20 September 2013

Great! it's a very beautiful poem...i love it

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Philip Andermann 20 September 2013

The beauty of this divine and gentle poem truly brought tears down my cheeks.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 June 2013

so beautiful, so tender, so romantics fused with good rhythm and flow make this poem show a honest and intense emotions

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Hazel Durham 07 June 2013

So beautiful with such delicate and graceful rhythm and flow a gentle, dreamlike write! !

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Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

a lovely write about youth and life. Something to talk about in later years.

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Zubiya Surti 28 May 2013

a very lovely poem, sir.thank you

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