Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Walk This Night Comments

Rating: 4.2

Dark clouds will move
Light rays will come
Dark night will end
Bright day will start
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 May 2009

Walk walk walk this night with all your might for other end is glorious light..............Good Write...........

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Joseph Poewhit 30 April 2009

Very beautiful poem BUT many fear the night.

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Eyan Desir 30 April 2009

Good flow Good write there dear poet

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

you bringt the idea inside your mind beautifully into this write, Kranthi...the night with its subdued light is a treat to watch no doubt...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 April 2009

The flow is good and the structure too. But there is some amount of redundancy, which you could have avoided. Even the imagery too hasnot taken a full shape. I'm sorry Kranthi to say this.

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