Thursday, August 9, 2018

Walk Slow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh traveller! walk slow.
Why so hasty to win the show?
Running fast is not the way for quick achievement.
At best it can be called a benefit without any benevolent.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2018

Only me and my shadow looked at each other. I had to plant my victory flag with much despair.......I find a great poetic beauty in this appreciable expression! Brilliantly penned! (10)

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Manaswini Dash 27 September 2018

Thank you very much for your encouraging comments.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2018

Very insightful poem. Says much about human psychology and behaviour. Thanks, manaswini.

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Manaswini Dash 10 August 2018

Dear Rajnish Manga, Thank you very much for your inspiring comment.

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Bisy Untan 09 August 2018

Life is a competitive path till one distinguishes his own ego. Then the speed of life slows down and begins to walk slowly with a sensible mind. Good communication. Congratulations.

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Manaswini Dash 09 August 2018

Thank you Bisy Untan for your nice comment

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Gajanan Mishra 09 August 2018

with friends and foes, life is going upwards

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Manaswini Dash 09 August 2018

Thank you Mr Mishra for your nice comment

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