Walk Of A Stream (From The Mad Man's Song) Comments
A few drops of ink were trying to flow out into a blend of black and white...
A few waves of music were trying to reach to their strings, , ,
to write and sing of emptiness, a little mine and a little yours...
In what is no longer, seeking a place I walk and then I meet mine...
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the line breaks of the first stanza should be smaller...otherwise the poem is an excellent one, i love it, .......as i have also written '''i am a mad man ''
Humbly i would like to disagree to the opinion about the length of this poem; in fact the length of this poem is no obstacle in it's being called n considered a beautiful piece of poetry...i would like to turn to the poem again n again...it's v good...
Didnt even read because of how long this is! Please shorten then we will talk.
Very nice poem.Philosophical.It is really a song that came from your heart of hearts!
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7/19/2025 5:25:54 PM # 1.0.0
for the first time i read a long poem without mumbling to myself 'but why so l...! ' u r unique!