Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Walk Me Out Of Winter~ Comments

Rating: 4.8

Walk me out of this Winter Vortex, beloved
Please erase, all of this January white
Melt the ice that dangles endlessly
Remove it all from my very sight...
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 08 March 2014

Marvin, thank you for taking the time to read my poetry.

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Theodora Onken 08 March 2014

Tiku, Thank you so very much!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 January 2014

Recent cold, snow, and ice have been a burden to all. Poem nicely invites spring. This very thought lets us live through difficulties. Thank you.

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Marvin Brato 20 January 2014

Loneliness makes me wish for the moments with friends and family, like winter makes us thinks of summer!

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 January 2014

Too much cold makes me remember spring too.very nicely done.Liked it.

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