Saturday, November 15, 2008

Walk In Comments

Rating: 4.0

today; i got into a accident. i didnt get another heart beat.
i would walk my own path.up to a blue and white limit.
myself; i would pack and leave the world upon my shoulders.
walking right into the lighted door thatwas calling my name; will lead to a miraculous life.
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Crystal Eloisa Gearhart 15 November 2008

I like this piece a lot. I can't really pinpoint what it is that I like so much... I think it's because it has sort of a conversational feel to it, or a stream of consciousness to it. The last line didn't seem to flow as well as the other lines but still, it's a good poem.

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