Sunday, October 19, 2008

Walk In The Graveyard Comments

Rating: 4.9

Leaves rustle under my bare feet,
The wind howls and swishes my hair,
dark shadows creep behind,
They hide in the trees as I turn around.
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Reshma Ramesh
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 April 2009

A spooky and frightful writing. I can't imagine being barefoot in a graveyard. I don't want my bare feet to touch the bodies of the dead. I enjoyed reading this. And if they took your soul, well, that's the price of admission. HaHaHaHa! GW62

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Raj Nandy 07 February 2009

Reshma, I loved this poem! Do read my poem - 'The Church and The Graveyard' -Raj Nandy

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 October 2008

Wonderfully penned. Beautiful imagery, apt words. But the ending I am little skeptic. If time permits read my GRAVEYARD. May be similar to this...10

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<font color=black>Nagourta 27 October 2008

Thank you.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Nice poem with nice imagery. It touches. 10+

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Gargi Saha 24 October 2008

WELL WRITTEN. U GET 10++......................

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Howard Johnson 24 October 2008

This is a most excellent piece, had me feeling creepy, Reshma, thank you for sharing

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Chitra - 23 October 2008

spooky...it surely sends shivers down the spine... 10+

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Seema Aarella 23 October 2008

A scary picture of graveyard brought out well...at the end of the read i looked over my shoulder...to confirm that i am alone! it surely does give me creeps!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 23 October 2008

SPOOKY...THE FEAR OF THE DEAD END IS REALLY SCARY... U PRESENTED IT REALLY WELL....

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Ramesh T A 22 October 2008

Graveyard scene in all its paraphernalia is well depicted to catch the attention of the readers as in a suspense movie of the past!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 October 2008

Fear of graveyard rather than graveyard engulf a life. skillfully written poem. good imagery. anyone will like reading it.

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C. P. Sharma 22 October 2008

Wow, it is amazingly rich in imagery, diction and rhythm. However, if I had to conclude, I would say something like this: Delightful souls there I had found, Perfect freedom had them crowned; All body aches now they did sneer, Now of death they had no fear. My eyes had the illusion of spirits, My soul in divine presence uplift; I could realize my perpetual being, The song of immortality now I sing.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 22 October 2008

Gr8 poem. Wonderful imagery. And i could feel that the last stanza is much deeper than it may seem. Thank you.

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Stephanie Saba 20 October 2008

Dark, yet detailed. An interesting write.

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 20 October 2008

Darkness is an all to familiar thing. Very well written. Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth

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Anand Dixit 20 October 2008

Very nice....3 cheers to the darkside..

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Carl Harris 19 October 2008

In this interesting and imaginative poem, you have clearly shown a talent for poetic expression, Reshma. Though you may be fairly new to this ancient art you communicate your feelings very well, which is an essential requirement for all who would write poetry. I think as you gain more experience, your poetry will become even more expressive and imaginative, and your future as a poetess is a bright one. Carl.

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Linda Moore 19 October 2008

Felt dark and erie...well written...10

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Marilyn Lott 19 October 2008

I enjoy graveyards very much. I have visited them all across the USA. I think of them as a delicious piece of history. I like this poem very much, Reshma! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Reshma Ramesh

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