Walk Beside Me A While Comments
Walk beside me a while, let me feel
Your presence; your absence surreal,
Often present; the lack of a presence
Now has past: the past, though is still present.
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sadness despair and hope all explode together on those heavy last stanza lines...the mind tries hard to re-paint memories once sweet...colorless on an empty reflective canvas...good poem, Rani...10
Absolutely beautiful, Rani. I love the sentiments and the imagery.
Your pen always amazes me Rani such a beautiful flow to this poem 10 ++++ Chris
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8/6/2025 6:45:06 PM # 1.0.0
The repetition of the title works really well to give your beautiful imagery substance. A really fine poem Rani.