.. Walk Away (Dark Comments

Hi Eyan.. Enjoyed This Poem... Open, Honest, Intuitive, Handled This Topic Nicely. (Because if you've lived past 17 years of age (smile) ... You've been in the throes of relationship angst) Check out my poem 'Lack of Love'... I express similar sentiments MoonBee

if words could kill, these would PC

i think its a little scary for me..lol but it was good...

Nice beggining and end...bit of chaos thru the middle...supposed 2 b like that?

prolific and interestingly written..............

wow anger in a poem very intersting, try adding more of this (!) , nice anyway

no splitting of throats.......... ok? wonderful poem.... and guns are better! im kidding.. no violence, use silence.

Very nice flow of emotion burst. I felt its each line. Well written.

Oh this is a very sad poem Eyan...well life is not always like we want it to be...Good luck... Hataw

Welcome back, Eyan this piece is an expression of mixed feelings..bitterness, pain, and joy bitterness yet love is still visible.. to sacrifice in the name of love.. thamnks for this beautiful piece, Eyan... it says a lot... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

Hi Eyan: welcome back. Boy did you come back with a bang. Pain, hurt, feeling and the whole nine yards. Good write, Keep it up. Also look in on my latest My Special Child thanks your friend Lynn

A strong poem and full of enthusiasm! ! .........good piece...10/10 Merna

Nice flow......welcome back to poemhunter sir.....Cheers....

Very strong vibes given in this poem. Very real and potent.

This reflects pain, hurt. sacrifice and anger and finally resignation. Nice emotional burst.

well, this is nicely done..it expresses many behavioral deffects like anger, sacrifices, hatred, self pity..my gosh..anyway..., this is very nice..

I walk away by minster of pain......... very nice expressions..........