Saturday, March 30, 2019

Walk Comments

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I was looking for shelter
I was looking for food
I was walking all alone through the journey of life,
I was pretending not to be unhappy.
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Jahidul Islam Onik
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 January 2020

You taught me how to walk Taught me how not to walk. Whispered into my ears- very fine poem dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2019

such a nice poem, Jahid. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2019

Maybe it was fateful Or a conflict between two dimensions of time, You found me. You spread your kingdom inside me You ruled me like a queen. profound words and expressions written in an endearing tone.. tony

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