Murphy Payne

Murphy Payne

Laurens County, South Carolina
Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Waking Up Comments

Rating: 4.8

Waking up
By the touch of your hands
Rubbing my back and
Searching gently for that itch
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Murphy Payne
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Louis Cecile 16 March 2011

I like the way a scene is built here in the poem for a common daily occurence. I can see the scene in the mind and can smile at it, which shows how excellently it has been written.

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Murphy Payne

Murphy Payne

Laurens County, South Carolina
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