.waking Up Comments

A concise and witty verse nicely penned with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing, Cretan.

Wow what a short and beautiful poem.10+

Short yet so dramatic. Lovely....

I'd be waking up but wherehave you been lately? Hope you are well.

Sometimes short are better than long, cause its said straight on what its mean...love it thou...thank you very much for sharing. Mary

Short but the words behind it mean so much. *Hugz** CC

I like this one a lot! Egal..

Keep writing ones like this, and he'll be giving you plenty more. Loved it. Hugs Anna xxx

Short, with all the criticism of the world snuggled in between the lines! All the hope of that world too. Oh yeah, you did it again! Put your opponents, if any, down for the count of 8, if they don't believe this one! Well worth the read! ! ! xxElysabeth

nice one ..............

Amen brother..........