I want only
To see the light
Of morning sun
So breathtaking
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I sincerely thank my PH friends Rose Marie Juan-austin and Dr Dillip K Swain for adding this poem to their favourites. I always consider that to be an honour.
I want only To taste this life...yes dear poet! A brilliant poem...liked it
A well thought out write embellished with stunning images. Well crafted. To my favorites.
The recurring lines make this poem more powerful and beautiful. A very encompassing write that focuses on life, beauty of nature, wonders of existence and faith in God.
Rose Marie, I so greatly appreciate the beauty and positivity of your wonderful comments! THX so very much, my PH friend!
Nature has remedy for all ills. No better company than Nature. Brilliant piece!
Allegedly, the Bach Remedies are the natural remedy to all ills. And yes, Nosheen, what better company than to be in Nature experiencing all of God's Wonder! THX so very much, dear poetess.
Magnificent lines and images. Enjoyed reading.
This poem touches all senses of life; including faith. Rises and sets are beautiful, shouldn't be lonesome. Great poem, Richard
Poet Rebb, your very positive constructive criticism is very welcomed by me. THX so very much.
The profoundest needs are met only when we come to want the simplest things. Magnificent verse, Richard.
Thomas Merton had come to that realization through a very difficult life! And just as he was at pillar of his life...he dies from a tragic accident? You be the judge!
I liked the way you said 'ONLY' and then added one by one what you want/like. Smart poem.5*****
We are the same wavelength, my friend. THX so very much, Dr. Nehal.
We are two souls that should be together Bravo! ! ! !
Through the writing of poetry, a special bond sometimes forms between poets. I believe that such a bond has formed between us and a few others on this special site.
2) LeeAnn, it's such a crying shame that some of those poets have chosen to loosen that bond. That is certainly their prerogative! But for heaven's sake, let us know why. Otherwise, we may worry that something tragic may have occurred to them!