Tuesday, May 20, 2008

Waking Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Opal shadows follow dawn
across a light and fallow morn.
Curtains drift on blossom scented air
as light seeps through a stifled stare.
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David Taylor
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Ernestine Northover 20 May 2008

Lovely poem that held and transported me through its beautiful words and lines. An excellent write and a real pleasure to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Original Unknown Girl 20 May 2008

Beautiful musing, you capture the mood perfectly David. HG: -) xx

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