Waking from Sleep Comments

A wonderful poem with natural word flow. The last stanza is excellent!

Now we sing and do tiny dances on the kitchen floor. Our whole body is like a harbor at dawn Wonderful and lovely presentation. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

And to meet the problems of life. Thanks for sharing.

Now we sing and do tiny dances on the kitchen floor. Our whole body is like a harbor at dawn; We know that our master has left us for the day. - ITALIAN: Ora cantiamo e approcciamo passi di danza nella cucina. Tutto il nostro corpo è come un porto all'alba; Consci che il capitano ci ha abbandonato per tutto il giorno.