Wakeup My Love (Moth And A Flame - Ii) Comments
A candle is cold
and scared to die
with flamy thorn
and melting desire
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this was a great poem im adding it to my favorite poems i realy enjoyed reading it good job
What an amazing write Bro... Sooo passioante, romatic and tormented piece... Flow is wonderful and surely enchants the reader... Well Done...
An enjoyable piece; liked the anology between life and a candle; although some may think it cliche, your verbage keeps it interesting. I'll send you some suggestions offline to help strengthem this poem. Thanks for sharing. -Joe
This poem you structured so well the effect of your patent style is doubly effective. terrific poetry.
'yearn in the morn for night to rise to kiis thy lips to die in thy eyes'... these lines bring out the sentiments of strong insatiated passonate feels...i would rather love 'to kiss the eyes and to die in the hip', Aijaz! ...a write strong sad and romantic...10
To kiss thy hips and die in thy eyes... fire there!
An excellent use of metaphor and imagery in this one. Write on, Asif. Kindest regards, Sandra
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7/18/2025 5:50:37 PM # 1.0.0
The eternal story of moth and flame beautifully potrayed........... Good Write...........