Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Wake Up Please! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.1

Don't you miss the earth with peace?
Don't you miss the lost justice?

Don't you think it's time to wake?
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Patricia Grantham 08 October 2013

Yes it is time for all of us to wake up. The world will always be in a state of turmoil if there is no peace. We all have to play a part in making peace Lets take one step at a time in attaining this. An inspiring write.

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Unwritten Soul 22 September 2013

This is beautiful Alookh, as what Hazel said, this is an inspiring write my lil cutie bro_Soul

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Hazel Durham 20 September 2013

Inspired write, we need to wake up anf fill this world with love and kindness and we will find true happiness!

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 19 September 2013

awesome my friend this is evocative and inspiring poem with strong and true message really good job 10/10

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Shraddha The Poetess 19 September 2013

beautiful and motivational poem........world is a beautiful creation of god or it was..! ! ! we all have to create that peace, , purityy and kindness again.......

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 September 2013

i have no words to say about this work.

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