Friday, May 13, 2016

Wake Up, O Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

O heart!
Wasted by the worldly cares
Think not of what's lost
Look around and afar
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2019

A splendid work with sparkling poetic expression.....beautifully penned..........10/10

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M Asim Nehal 18 May 2016

And poem will go in my poem list for sure.....What a wonderful and inspiring poem....100++++

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Akhtar Jawad 13 May 2016

An attractive message through a beautiful poem.

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Edmund Strolis 13 May 2016

I am such a fan of this declaration of independence. This freeing of the spirit from the shackles of regret. Nature is prominent in its freedom, the river's flow. The velvet softness. Let it sink into you. We stand in our own way, masters of our own prison. A theme so well expressed and close to my heart.....splendid.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 May 2016

Im glad this poem has touched your heart. Thank u Edmund for ur sterling comment.

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Barry Middleton 13 May 2016

Lovely indeed. This is like a prayer to self, imploring my own heart to wake up and appreciate life and the beautiful world where love is waiting.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 May 2016

Thanku Barry. Ur comments r always encouraging.

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Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

That's so meaningful... lovely poem..vivid..good..well done..

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Nosheen Irfan 13 May 2016

Thank u Randhir.

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