Wake Up, Make Up: Fake Love, Make Love Comments

Love the idea of it simple n to the point.

well i really lik the fastness of this peom. I think it puts across the meaning and message well. I love the words and the way you've put them on the page :) 10/10 x stella

This one is fast and a bit sad for me. Very good emotion conveyed here though. In this crazy fast-paced world, we have to go back to the slowness of past decades I think and sip like they did-the years go by fast enough so take charge and make sure they're good ones. I ACTUALLY LOVED THIS ONE! !