Wake Up Honey! Comments

Wow so real! Siddartha, I love this beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. +10

Nice.........thanks for sharing..

Another beautiful and interesting poem. I am getting familiar with your style.

Lovely poem! True to life and marriage!

Interesting and amusing. Best situation comedy on silent communications. Thanks for sharing.

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Siddartha, such a fine poen👍👍👍

OMG, ego's presence in love rules that moment. Amazing :)

Hahaha... That's funny but sad. Sometimes marriage becomes so much of expectations and ego that love and care just cower in a corner. Beautifully written 😊

Loved it! Particularly the way you ended the poem with that witty couplet was indeed remarkable.

Liked it! Loved it! Written in a unique funny style! Well done. Particularly the end verse.

Ha ha ha very funny. A good read

hello very good and interesting thank you

Reminds me of the email communications i had with my business partner. we had so many arguments we had to stick to simple writteen notes which worked only for a short while til it ended the way your poem did. good sense of humor and joy to read

Siddharth, I like this poem. Simple and beautiful. A good read.

An interesting and a narrative write. We should not let ego come in between us and our loved ones. Take care

You describe a profound reality. In one sense, waking up means recognizing the situation and taking the necessary remedial steps to restore the relationship. In another sense, wake up means waking from the metaphorical death of that which has passed. A great work, Siddartha.

communication is key. very nicely written.

I have often keep written journals when in love, so to share my inner thoughts with that person, when time and routine seems to diminish the newness. A penned return to emotions sometimes overlooked. It serves well to rekindle dying flames. Your poem reignited thoughts of this. Excellent piece!

I love the way you brought the skirmish to a playful finish.