Wake Up....Can You...? ? ....My Love Comments

wow..what a write! really sweet...growing more and more poetic... a passionate touch through your words... very impressive...and pictured out a very wonderful sight... under the moonlight....by the seashore too? smiless I love this write...very moving...so light...like a gentle caress of the passing breeze.. smells so fresh and cool... 10+++++ lovelots, maia

more poeitic..these are nicely written..short lines can make the poem beautiful..the thought is very nice.. wake up, come with me lets share stories for the night laughters had make the moon wake and take note, , the moon smiles too with us, , ...grace

Wow this a wonderful heart speaking for a wonderful sweeheart..lines of deep love and longing to that time when the depth and warmth was high..still waiting to go to the same time and feel of love...........Winnie