Saturday, July 14, 2007

Wake Up Call ★ Comments

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I have so much anger it's so hard to get past.
I just want to be able to smile and be happy at last.
This is tearing me apart, and for what?
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Coreena Dejesus
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Con Nie 08 March 2008

I love the last line on this. Good expression of feelings. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Patricia Bankhead 17 July 2007

I know the pain that relationships can bring. If I knew then what I know now I would have moved on. I've learned you can't make others love you but there is always somebody that does. Enjoyed reading. God bless you. He loves you and so do I.

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Who's Erwhatsit 14 July 2007

Nice rhymes, painful subject. Emotions well said.

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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