Thursday, August 9, 2012

Wake Up Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

His pain
For me
Disdain
Till
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Sanjay Mehta
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Allemagne Roßmann 14 September 2012

Sublime and to be honest an exquisite piece of poetry.Well done SIr.....

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The 'he' in the lines remains to be a person still to be sketched out for better analysis of what makes him. I liked your play with the chosen words and found the alliteration remarkably strengthening the short piece. Thank you for asking to comment

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