Sunday, September 21, 2014

Wake Up! Comments

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Wake up! slumbering eyes.
Engulfed in darkness of night.
Wake up! just open your eyes.
I'll show you dream in daylight.
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Md. Asadullah
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Jossy Okun 10 November 2014

Nice poem

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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2014

try and see beyond the stars who knows dream may be real and reality just an illusion

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Akhtar Jawad 28 September 2014

Dreams are dreams, for a common man like if is true it's a game of probability. However, dreams of prophets are always true.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 24 September 2014

@ Valsa George and @ Aftab Alam truly said......... beautiful write bhai.....

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Valsa George 22 September 2014

Sometimes dreams can be real and reality- an illusion! What a strange paradox! Indeed a profound write!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 September 2014

A call to awake..Its duty to awake the people if they don't it is upto them a peot has done his duty very nice bhai

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2014

Wake up, try and look far as you can, try and see far beyond stars. Really a great work with great feeling. Nice on sharing.

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