Friday, April 17, 2009

Wake Up Comments

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I wake up and the air is heavy,
My body is cold,
My mind is blank,
My feelings are taken by melancholy and emptiness,
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Angel Uchiyama
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Aylissa Ramirez 01 May 2009

i love the mood it sets over me :)

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Debra Kemper 21 April 2009

Very nicely said. Good visuals, dreary tone, but I can relate :)

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