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Good poem. A deep friendship between a grandfather and his grandchild…a fitting ode to friendship.4*

awsm in the name of grandpaa

so nyc and awsm in the name of grandpaa

I'm so sorry to hear about your grandfather Saheb. Your poem is very poignant, moving and sad. I can see from your writing that you have allot of talent and potential at such a young age! I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

I pray for your grandpa. I too loved my grandpa who was like a friend to me and had been an inspiration. I am with you. Very nice poem.

Very heart touching poem bringing tears to eyes.Feeling like someone very close in pains.May God listen to your prayers and bless your Grandpa many more years of healthy life and bless your friendship.- - - - - - - - 10

I pray that your beloved grandpa will pull through, a beautiful write that is bursting with your deep love for your dear grandpa!

Such a rhythm! it sounds like a song! so tender! I pray for your Grandpa - name...

Verily, a heart touching poem Let your grandpa recover ad early as possible Be blessed...10

Nice work dedicatd to the dead; especially seeing someone who is very weak and about to die. Thanks for sharing.

It's a very touching poem, may God! bless his grandpa with health and a long life........................10

Marvellous depiction. May God bring back the life of your grand pa dear Saheb, thanks for sharing.

Very touching! May God listen to this loving grand son's plea to bring his grand pa back to life! My prayers too Saheb!