Monday, August 24, 2015

Wake Up... Comments

Rating: 5.0

A commence
of dawn sinks
at dusk,
Ever mull
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Randhir kaur
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Siddartha Montik 21 February 2017

Wonderful! ! Though short in terms every feeling is right.. The Everest Will look after it Over Hindustan! ! Nu\ice write! !

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Randhir Kaur 10 July 2016

Thank you Soul Watcher for the kind review..

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Soul Watcher 09 July 2016

I do not know how I reached to this poem, but what I am sure of is that I liked it.: -) Thanks for sharing Randhir

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thank you Gajanan Sir for reading.

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thanks Edward. Stay in touch.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2016

A date of havoc is sooner near with a might! ! Nice work.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2015

why d earth is round, good one, thanks..

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Randhir kaur

Assam, jorhat
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