Wake Me Up Comments

Fantastic in first expression. A real track to move eternity through art of words. Actually marvelous is the right word to appreciate this piece of beauty. Done and have another to have, stretch your pain again! Beauty and perversion, so much related each other, many times it feels hard to differentiate the truth behind the origin of creation. Nice. Run long to write more.....

Let history march forward In its relentless lines of life and death Amazing conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.

This poem written with melody and rhymes, i really enjoyed read it line by line..and with the beautiful message, it make it even beautiful