Friday, November 9, 2012

Waitress Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.6

I stare into a lonely nighttime puddle
'Don't Worry' tattoo'd on her right wrist;
'Be Happy' on the left
-She puts out a cigarette
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Ray Quesada
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Ronn Michael Salinas 12 December 2012

Interesting point of view, and good write, dude. Hope amidst hopelessness, nice.

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Owain Glyn 02 December 2012

I was fortunate enough to visit India for a friends wedding and was humbled by the optimism of people that had very little. Though, in truth, they had far more than many of us.

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Yash Shinde 23 November 2012

very beautiful, great flowing description of the lady great work ray! ! !

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Josh Dinkin 21 November 2012

A nice detailed glimpse into a life of lowly servitude. Also has a god mix of reality and insight. I have had many of the same thoughts watching waitresses and others do their jobs. You do well with the fee-verse style.

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Ruby Honeytip 18 November 2012

Have we met? Holy Cow! ! !

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Red O'mara 09 November 2012

Lovely portrait of a woman finding things to be happy about where a lot would refuse to.

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