Waiting To Die Comments

I just wanted to reiterate again, on how much I loved this poem of yours. Pretty darned good. An excellent write! God bless us all-MJG.

Great write. Yes, an added s on the end of the word (Reign) would most likely make that line rhyme much better. Still, a great master piece! God bless the artist-MJG.

What we should properly understand is that past is afterall past. Let us not experience it emotionally but only as a witness. With this guideline, our life is in safe waters. Why should we feel being guilty? Our short comings are only the outcome of an immature mind. Our life is a big journey towards maturity. This means that at any given moment we are mature but when it comes to our reflecting about it, we may tend to feel that it was a case of immaturity. When we were in LKG, we collected pebbles but when we were in 10th class, we collected stamps. Both are perfect actions from their own point of view. This is what we have to realise.

Hi! I get the miseries and write a lot of pieces about it.I like your wording.

Very good. It's described in an beautiful and rythmic way. well done i love it.

Incredable imagery that transports those who dear to look into the very presence of death that is delayed.

That's good and a bit dark we all make a lot of mistakes though good work

a very dark and moving poem, but remember Pablo, we have to forgive ourselves in the end... for we are merely human.....

Amazing! I love your work... an adventure in every poem! Please comment on some of mine, especially Confusion...10!

Folly of man misguides him till the end. Well said the deep message in a beautiful way in this poem of yours. Nice to read!

a powerful and poignant depiction of the struggle of coming face to face with our mortality

beautiful poem though you have changed the form of rhyming in the last two stanzas, thanks for sharing

Beautiful flow to this, powerful piece, you are an excellent poet Pablo, 10 Lynda xx

I thought this was a powerful poem and well penned with some excellent poetic lines. Jim

Rhymed and rhythmic poetry.......pleasant to read...

Crikey, this is pretty hard to read, very powerful words and images conveyed here. I guess that says you are a master of the word! ! HG: -) xx

great poem...expressed your great thoughts in this deep write... touching.... in life we sometimes feel like that...and its part of our being human.. thanks for this great share... 10++

A soul stripped to the essence of its being. You leave nothing to suggestion, Pablo. Very poignant.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

The older we are the more we realize that this is so true. But, we must enjoy our lives as much as we can and be grateful. Great poem, Pablo! A '10! ' Best wishes, Marilyn

great expressive poem....you really are one of the better poets in this site...10