Thursday, August 22, 2013

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Rating: 4.9

Please
Don't ever think
That I don't understand
That I don't know how you feel
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Lyn Paul
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Bri Edwards 20 May 2018

it is beautifully-written, and the thoughts are super-positive, though many would not be able to believe, especially if progress was 'too slow' and backsliding occurred. i WOULD want YOU in my corner, Lyn! ! Maybe several corners! ! to MyPoemList. i can think of no way to make it better. bri :)

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Chinedu Dike 15 March 2017

Procrastination is an invisible enemy of progress. As the saying goes The journey of a million miles starts with the first step. An insightful poem bristling with wisdom.

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Hazel Durham 11 September 2013

Wonderful write full of great warmth and understanding with wisdom and kindness! Inspired write!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 September 2013

Wow, what an inspirational and wonderful poem! 10/10. 'One step One path One new corner to turn It can be done. This you will learn' Beautifully said! a great poem, Lyn!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 August 2013

very inspiring poem and a moving one. great write, Lyn.

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Unwritten Soul 29 August 2013

It is a pleasing poem to read and inspire people to be more confident about self_Soul

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 August 2013

one step at a time is all you need to achieve Well said. Rome was not built in a day. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 25 August 2013

A lovely thoughtful poem - we all need to reach out at times, and often feel that there is no one there for us.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 August 2013

Beautiful poem..telling you care for them. Loved it Lyn. Thank you for the lovely comments for my poem Breaking News.

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

a lovely emotional poem telling someone you will be there for them.

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