Thursday, October 4, 2012

Waiting, Still Waiting Comments

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i have been to the place where dignity calls,
heard the sounds of families running for cover.
felt the pounding of guns, smelled the stench of bodies,
watched men who hated theirselves in another.
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Eric Cockrell
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Alla Simone 13 October 2012

Thanks for these strong, solid words firmly rooted in truth. An excellent message and illuminating voice is projected throughout. Excellent! Some lines that especially stood out were: where good men pray for the courage to die.... now who will lead and who will follow, the path of yesterday dont lead to tomorrow. the end of the world, the beginning of time. while the sheep are lost and the goats are blind. We have been living in the age of obscenity for a long time, though many refuse to acknowledge the constant exposure. Again, thanks.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 October 2012

A powerful piece of impassioned verse, Eric...Excellent rhyme scheme...awesome storyline...Freedom hath no superseders! ~FjcR~

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